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The diagram below illustrates the carbon cycle in nature. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison relevant.

The illustration displays the cycle of carbon in the environment. Overall, carbon naturally cycles though the ecosystem via plants, animals and the ocean. Human actions also have influence on the cycle. Firstly, carbon occupy a large proportion in atmosphere, and it exist by a stable form called CO₂. CO₂are absorbed by plants though photosynthesis, which a unique chemical reaction between sunlight and plants and the carbon could be divided into decay organisms and organic carbon. Organic carbon mixing with dead organisms and waste products, which are form animals, will form fossils and fossil fuels. Secondly, carbon uptaked by ocean, however, most of it exist in fuels and then become CO₂again sending out to atmosphere by auto and factory emissions. not only industrial emissions but also animals respiration and plant respiration and even the root respiration. Overall, this diagram shows us the carbon how to cycle in the ecosystem.
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in the environment.
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naturally
cycles though the ecosystem via
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, animals and the ocean. Human actions
also
have influence on the cycle.

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occupy a large proportion in atmosphere, and it
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by a stable form called CO₂.

CO₂
are absorbed
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though photosynthesis, which a unique chemical reaction between sunlight and
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and the
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could
be divided
into decay organisms and organic
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. Organic
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mixing with dead organisms and waste products, which are form animals, will form fossils and fossil fuels.

Secondly
,
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uptaked
by ocean,
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, most of it exist in fuels and then become
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CO₂again
sending out to atmosphere by auto and factory emissions.
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industrial emissions
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animals respiration and
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respiration and even the root respiration.

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IELTS academic The diagram below illustrates the carbon cycle in nature.

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