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The diagram below illustrates how glass is recycled Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The diagram below illustrates how glass is recycled
The figure depicts the process of recycling the glass. Overall it can be seen that the process by which glass is recycled is a multistep, cyclical process, which consists of three main stages: collection, processing and distribution. In the first stage, customers place used bottles in collection bins, and the bottles are collected by large trucks. Turning to the next stage, the bottles are taken by the trucks to a cleaning plant, where they are cleaned with high-pressurised water. They are then separated according to colour (green, brownor clear), and taken to a glass factory, in which the bottles are crushed into pieces. The pieces are melted in a furnace and the resulting liquid, together with new liquid glass, is poured into a bottle mould to produce the new bottles. In the third and final stage, the new resulting bottles are filled and packed, and then sent to supermarkets, where the customers buy them and the process begins again and again.
The figure depicts the
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process
of recycling the glass.

Overall
it can be
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seen
that the
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process
by which glass
is recycled
is a multistep, cyclical
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process
, which consists of three main
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stages
: collection, processing and distribution.

In the
first
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stage
, customers place
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used
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bottles
in collection bins, and the
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bottles
are collected
by large trucks.

Turning to the
next
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stage
, the
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bottles
are taken
by the trucks to a cleaning plant, where they
are cleaned
with
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high-pressurised
water. They are then separated according to
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colour
(green,
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brownor
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clear
), and taken to a glass factory, in which the
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bottles
are crushed
into pieces. The pieces
are melted
in a furnace and the resulting liquid, together with new liquid glass,
is poured
into a
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bottle
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mould
to produce the new bottles.

In the third and final
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stage
, the new resulting
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bottles
are filled
and packed, and then
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sent
to supermarkets, where the customers
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buy
them and the
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process
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begins
again and again.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS academic The diagram below illustrates how glass is recycled

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
161 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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