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The diagram below illustrates how electricity is produced in five stages totally.

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The diagram below illustrates how electricity is produced in five stages totally. Overall, starting with coal and oxygen are put together. Then, chemical transformations have affect on them so as to produce electricity. The very first stage begins with automatic transportation of coal to a furnace. Besides, oxygen-another ingredient is added. This combination lead to raw syngas. On the other side, the leftover which is slag is eliminated. Raw syngas undergo the removal in order to put out CO2, Mercury, Sulphur and have purified syngas. Gas turbine is the next station. There are two directions. The first one lead to generator to make electricity. Or hot exhaust gases from gas turbine can come to heat recovery steam generator. It is disposed to make steam. Flue gases are discarded out of generator. Steam has to go through steam turbine and generator before creating electricity.
The diagram below illustrates how electricity
is produced
in five stages
totally
.

Overall
, starting with coal and oxygen
are put
together. Then, chemical transformations have
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affect
on them
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so as to
produce electricity.

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first
stage
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begins
with automatic transportation of coal to a furnace.
Besides
, oxygen-another ingredient is
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added
. This combination lead to raw
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syngas
. On the other side, the leftover which is slag
is eliminated
. Raw
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syngas
undergo the removal in order to put out CO2, Mercury,
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Sulphur
and have purified
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syngas
. Gas turbine is the
next
station. There are two directions. The
first
one lead to generator to
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make
electricity. Or hot exhaust gases from gas turbine can
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come
to heat recovery steam generator. It
is disposed
to
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make
steam. Flue gases
are discarded
out of generator. Steam
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has to
go through steam turbine and generator
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before
creating electricity.

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