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The three pie charts demonstrate different type of cars, which used major road bridge during 1965, 1985, and 2005 in England.

The three pie charts demonstrate different type of cars, which used major road bridge during 1965, 1985, and 2005 in England. GLjeQ
The three pie charts demonstrate different type of cars, which used major road bridge during 1965, 1985, and 2005 in England. Overall, it can be seen that, in the three pictures, the amount of private cars was more than other kinds of vehicles. The number of recreational vehicles were the lowest percentage among the other transportation vehicles except in 2005, at 5%. Focusing on 1965, almost half of the cars which went on the bridge were private cars, at 47%, as well as this amount increased by 1985 and 2005. Public transport vehicles were the second first wagons which ride on the major board bridge in 1965, at 29%, this amount became five percentages by 2005. As for the 1985, The number of the England citizens which used major road bridge by using lorries and other commercial vehicles, where 26 percent, which this rate became half by 2005. Recreational vehicles used the bridge road more in 2005 more than previous years, at 9%. Meanwhile, the proportion of the vehicles used the bridge were upward by 1965 and then downward by 2005, at 12%.
The three pie charts demonstrate
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, which
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during 1965, 1985, and 2005 in England.

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that, in the three pictures, the amount of private
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cars
was more than other kinds of
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. The number of recreational
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were the lowest percentage among the other transportation
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vehicles
except in 2005, at 5%.

Focusing on 1965, almost half of the
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cars
which went on the
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bridge
were private
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cars
, at 47%,
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as this amount increased by 1985 and 2005. Public transport
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vehicles
were the second
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wagons which ride on the major board
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bridge
in 1965, at 29%, this amount became five percentages by 2005.

As for the 1985, The number of the England citizens which
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used
major road
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by using lorries and other commercial
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, where 26 percent, which this rate became half by 2005. Recreational
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vehicles
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used
the
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bridge
road more in 2005 more than previous years, at 9%. Meanwhile, the proportion of the
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vehicles
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used
the
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were upward by 1965 and then downward by 2005, at 12%.

IELTS academic The three pie charts demonstrate different type of cars, which used major road bridge during 1965, 1985, and 2005 in England.

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