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The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam.

The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. GLjjB
The pie charts illustrate million of exports between the United States and Vietnam. Looking at the chart, it is immediately obvious that the amount of Vietnam trade internationally is smaller than the US trade. It is clear that Vietnam mostly send food overseas to the US. Coffee occupies approximately half of the chart by 23 million dollars and registers as the highest figure. In Vietnam, fruit and vegetables are traded abroad at 16 million dollars. Whereas seafood and rice are roughly reaches the same total amount at 4. 4 and 4. 3 million dollars respectively, garments and other are both the lowest at only 2 million dollars. In the US, the market is more active when their amount is higher than those in Vietnam around 3 times. Aircraft parts from the US is 72 million dollars and was the maximum. Other things that was made in the United State was more than 17 times higher than those in Vietnam. While fertiliser is approximately a half of machinery, cotton are exact 2 times higher than cars at 12 million and 6 million dollars respectively.
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million
of exports between the United States and Vietnam.
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at the chart, it is immediately obvious that the amount of Vietnam trade
internationally
is smaller than the US trade.

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food overseas to the US. Coffee occupies approximately half of the chart by 23
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and registers as the highest figure. In Vietnam, fruit and vegetables
are traded
abroad at 16
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million
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. Whereas seafood and rice are roughly reaches the same total amount at 4. 4 and 4. 3
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respectively
, garments and other are both the lowest at
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2
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In the US, the market is more active when their amount is higher than those in Vietnam around 3 times. Aircraft parts from the US is 72
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million
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dollars
and was the maximum. Other things that
was made
in the United State was more than 17 times higher than those in Vietnam. While
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is approximately a half of machinery, cotton are exact 2 times higher than cars at 12
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and 6
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