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The given single line graph  illustrates the number of cases of cancer disease in China between the years 1960 and 1995. In 1960 the number of cases was at point 100 and started to increase slightly. During the next 5 years from approximetly 1965 to 1970 the number of cases has doubled. Therefore, we see the significant growth and reaching a peak of 500 cancer cases from the year 1970 to 1980. For the next 10 years we observe the positive tendency of reducing the cases of disease. The line graph shows how the number of cases declined just under 400 to the year of 1985. By the year of 1990 the number of cancer disease dropped to zero. Eventually, the period from 1990 to 1995 there were no registered cases of cancer disease in China.
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 single line graph
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illustrates the
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number
of cases of
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cancer
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disease
in China between the years 1960 and 1995. In 1960 the
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number
of cases was at point 100 and
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started
to increase
slightly
. During the
next
5 years from
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approximetly
1965 to 1970 the
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number
of cases has doubled.
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, we
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see
the significant growth and reaching a peak of 500
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cancer
cases from the
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year
1970 to 1980. For the
next
10 years we observe the
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positive
tendency of reducing the cases of
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disease
. The line graph
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shows
how the
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number
of cases declined
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just
under 400 to the
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year
of 1985. By the
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year
of 1990 the
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number
of
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cancer
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disease
dropped to zero.
Eventually
, the period from 1990 to 1995 there were no registered cases of
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cancer
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disease
in China.
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