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The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the diagram below.

The given diagram shows the sample of contaminated water was refined by three natural stages to generate clean drinking water for versatile uses. Accordingly to the diagram manifest using a large metal container, with adding three layers of different forms of soil, which was the first layer a gravel, charcoal and then sand. Firstly, the process start with adding polluted water to the tank, then the water starts to refine through fine sand, after that the water pass into second layer which is charcoal, the sample water are finally, push through the gravel layer to percolate the entire contaminants of water to stabilize at the storage tank, which is attached to the tap water. Overall, the process of impure water was depend on the natural materials are take it from our environment, which is percolate the polluted water through three stages to obtain potable water, which can be taken out for different uses.

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given
 diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the sample of contaminated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
was refined
 by three natural stages to generate clean drinking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 for versatile This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Accordingly,
Accordingly
 to the diagram manifest using a large metal container, with adding three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetfloorcoatblanketbedthickness
layers
 of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 forms of soil, which was the first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetfloorcoatblanketbedthickness
layer
 a gravel, charcoal and then sand.

Firstly
, the process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 with adding polluted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 to the tank, then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 to refine through fine sand, after that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 pass into second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetfloorcoatblanketbedthickness
layer
 which is charcoal, the sample You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 are finally
, push through the gravel You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetfloorcoatblanketbedthickness
layer
 to percolate the entire contaminants of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 to stabilize at the storage tank, which is attached
 to the tap water.

Overall
, the process of impure You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 was depend on the natural materials are take it from our environment, which is Consider using either the past participle “percolated” or the present participle “percolating” here.percolatedpercolating
percolate
 the polluted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 through three stages to obtain potable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
, which can be taken
 out for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
. 