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The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the diagram below.

The given diagram shows the sample of contaminated water was refined by three natural stages to generate clean drinking water for versatile uses. Accordingly to the diagram manifest using a large metal container, with adding three layers of different forms of soil, which was the first layer a gravel, charcoal and then sand. Firstly, the process start with adding polluted water to the tank, then the water starts to refine through fine sand, after that the water pass into second layer which is charcoal, the sample water are finally, push through the gravel layer to percolate the entire contaminants of water to stabilize at the storage tank, which is attached to the tap water. Overall, the process of impure water was depend on the natural materials are take it from our environment, which is percolate the polluted water through three stages to obtain potable water, which can be taken out for different uses.
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the sample of contaminated
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water
was refined
by three natural stages to generate clean drinking
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water
for versatile
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layers
of
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different
forms of soil, which was the
first
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layer
a gravel, charcoal and then sand.

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, the process
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start
with adding polluted
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water
to the tank, then the
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water
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starts
to refine through fine sand, after that the
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water
pass into second
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layer
which is charcoal, the sample
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water
are
finally
, push through the gravel
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layer
to percolate the entire contaminants of
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water
to stabilize at the storage tank, which
is attached
to the tap water.

Overall
, the process of impure
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water
was depend on the natural materials are take it from our environment, which is
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percolate
the polluted
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water
through three stages to obtain potable
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water
, which can
be taken
out for
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different
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IELTS academic The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the diagram below.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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