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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features of the 2 maps and make comparisons by reporting the main features where relevant

The picture decipts the map of how to access the city hospital in two different years. The hospital is in the center of the ring road which surrounds the whole hospital. It can be reached by the Hospital Road which is connected to the City Road. People were not happy with the road system in the year 2007, there were lots of traffic jams in the Hospital Road because of the bus stands and the public and the hospital staffs has to use the same parking lot which was only small in area and many parked their in the road. This was very hard to patients who were visiting the hospital for emergency purposes. The government decided to change the landscape the area to solve this issue. The area aronud the hospital has changed in many ways to facilitate the visitors and hospital workers so that they can reach the hospital easily
The picture
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decipts
the map of how to access the city
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hospital
in two
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different
years. The
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hospital
is in the center of the ring
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road
which surrounds the whole
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hospital
. It can
be reached
by the
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Hospital
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Road
which
is connected
to the City Road.

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People
were not happy with the
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road
system in the year 2007, there were lots of traffic jams in the
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Hospital
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Road
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because
of the bus stands and the public and the
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hospital
staffs
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has to
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use
the same parking lot which was
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only
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small
in area and
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many
parked their in the
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road
. This was
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very
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hard
to patients who were visiting the
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hospital
for emergency purposes.

The
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government
decided to
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change
the landscape the area to solve this issue. The area
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aronud
the
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hospital
has
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changed
in
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many
ways to facilitate the visitors and
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hospital
workers
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so
that they can reach the
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hospital
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easily

IELTS academic Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features of the 2 maps and make comparisons by reporting the main features where relevant

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3 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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