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The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest.

The provided pie charts as well as bar graph represents the percentage of males and females arrested in 1990 to 1994 and the most current causes for arrest. As an overall trend, the maximum percentage of men were arrested than women in the given time period. Moreover, public drinking was the highest cause for people arrest. As is present in pie charts, males arrested in the five years ending 1994 were nearly one-third (32%) whereas the percentage of females were just under one-tenth (9%). The percentage of men and women which were not arrested were 68% and 91% respectively. Moving towards the bar graph, maximum percentile of people were arrested due to drinking in public that was above 30%. Furthermore, under 8% persons were arrested which had no answer. In addition, 27% males were guilty for driving while they were drunk. Apart from this, the percentage of females arrested for drive drinking, breach of order, assault, theft, and other reasons were between 12 to 19%. Likewise, females the males who arrested for same reasons exept drive drinking were almost the identical.
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as bar graph represents the
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and
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arrested
in 1990 to 1994 and the most
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current
causes for arrest.

As an
overall
trend, the maximum
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percentage
of
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men
were
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arrested
than women in the
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given
time period.
Moreover
, public
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drinking
was the highest cause for
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people
arrest.

As is present in pie charts,
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males
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arrested
in the five years ending 1994 were
nearly
one-third (32%) whereas the
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percentage
of
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females
were
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just
under one-tenth (9%). The
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percentage
of
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men
and women which were not
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arrested
were 68% and 91%
respectively
.

Moving towards the bar graph, maximum percentile of
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people
were
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arrested
due to
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drinking
in public that was above 30%.
Furthermore
, under 8% persons were
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arrested
which had no answer.
In addition
, 27%
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males
were guilty for driving while they
were drunk
. Apart from this, the
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percentage
of
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females
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arrested
for drive
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drinking
, breach of order, assault, theft, and other reasons were between 12 to 19%.
Likewise
,
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females
the
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males
who
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arrested
for same reasons
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exept
drive
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drinking
were almost the identical.
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IELTS academic The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest.

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