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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram depicts a wave-energy machine. It is also known as the hydro power. As we can see from the diagram, it works on the wave energy of the water. Based on the gravitational force of moon, the high tide and low tides occurs and waves in sea takes place. As soon as the wave is in the direction of machine, the waters enters the machine from inlet channel. Depending on the inward force, it rotates shaft. The enegrgy associated with the wave is turned into the rotational energy with the help of this shaft. As the shaft rotates, it transfers the energy to the turbine as both of them are connected. As per electromagnestim, it helps to generate the electricity. There are inlets for air flows also. Wave-energy machines are can be used at 2 positions. It can be placed in large waves or in small waves. both posotions have their own merits and demerits. When it is placed in large waves, it creates high output as the energy associated with the wave is high. But at the same time, its cost of installation is high. If we talk about the psotion of machine in small waves, it output will be low. As the power or energy of the waves is low, it will not be significant for the the generation of electricity. Cost of installation will be low for small waves. Over all, this machine can be used as per the need and as per the budget of the company.
The diagram depicts a wave-energy
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machine
. It is
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hydro power
. As we can
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see
from the diagram, it works on the
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wave
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energy
of the water. Based on the gravitational force of moon, the
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high
tide and
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low
tides occurs and
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waves
in sea takes place.

As
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soon
as the
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wave
is in the direction of
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machine
, the waters enters the
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machine
from inlet channel. Depending on the inward force, it rotates shaft. The
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enegrgy
associated with the
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wave
is turned
into the rotational
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energy
with the
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help
of this shaft.

As the shaft rotates, it transfers the
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energy
to the turbine as both of them
are connected
. As per
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electromagnestim
, it
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helps
to generate the electricity. There are inlets for air flows
also
.

Wave-energy
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machines
are can be
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used
at 2 positions. It can
be placed
in large
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waves
or in
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small
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waves
.
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both
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posotions
have their
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own
merits and demerits. When it
is placed
in large
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waves
, it creates
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high
output as the
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energy
associated with the
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wave
is
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high
.
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But
at the same time, its cost of installation is
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high
. If we talk about the
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psotion
of
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machine
in
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small
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waves
, it output will be
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low
. As the power or
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energy
of the
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waves
is
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low
, it will not be significant for
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the the
generation of electricity. Cost of installation will be
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low
for
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small
waves.

Over all, this
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machine
can be
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used
as per the need and as per the budget of the
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company
.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic
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