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The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey.

The diagram gives us information on different steps taken by bees inorder to make honey. Overall, the process consists of seven steps starting from bees leaving their hives in search of flowers and ends at sweet honey being produced. Firstly, the bees have to build a container. This is called a hive and consists of many individually built cells. Next, the bees leave the hive inorder to search for flowers. When they find a suitable flower, they collect the nectar from it, which is used to make honey. The nectar is then taken back to the hive where the production process can begin. First, it is put into cells. Then, following this, the nectar must be cooled down. Inorder to do this, the bees fan the nectar -filled cells with their wings. As a result, the nectar loses its water content and then finally, the honey is is produced.

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