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The chart below gives information about the number of books rented in a British local library in 2009.

The bar chart illustrates information about how many books are borrowed from the UK local library in 2009. Overall, the figure for books rented by the library experienced slight flactuations from the first month of the year through December and the largest number of books are rented at the end of the year. In the first month of 2009, Malton Town Library rented ten books. In February, the trend declined to 6 books, but this was followed by a slight increase to 7 in the first moth of Spring. Despite growing to 13 in April, the trend of rented books flactuated between March and July. Having reached steadily to 20 in August, there was a significant decline to 12 books in the next month. Despite the slight decline of 14 to 9 rents between October and November, the fugure saw a sharp rise to 21 at the end of the year 2009.
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, the figure for
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rented by the library experienced slight
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flactuations
from the
first
month of the year through December and the largest number of
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are rented
at the
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end
of the year.

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month of 2009,
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Malton
Town Library rented ten
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. In February, the trend declined to 6
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,
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was followed
by a slight increase to 7 in the
first
moth of Spring. Despite growing to 13 in April, the trend of rented
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flactuated
between March and July.

Having reached
steadily
to 20 in August, there was a significant decline to 12
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books
in the
next
month. Despite the slight decline of 14 to 9 rents between October and November, the
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fugure
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a sharp rise to 21 at the
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end
of the year 2009.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about the number of books rented in a British local library in 2009.

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