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The diagram below explains the water cycle as well as outlines how the movement of water above and below the surface of the Earth

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The diagram below explains the water cycle as well as outlines how the movement of water above and below the surface of the Earth. Overall, the process involves various different stages organized in chronological order, starting with the evaporation of water from the ocean and culminating with the back of water to the Ocean. To begin with, the ocean where contributed about 80% of total water vapor in the air by the evaporation process. Under the high temperature of the sun, all the water in the air are condensing vapor to form clouds. The cloud will move around the earth assist by the wind when the clouds reach all the requirements it will start raining. Before return to the ocean, it has to be throughout the stage called salt water intrusion. Water takes several ways to return to the ocean, first, it being surface runoff where rain or snow water flows from the stop. In addition, water can be filtered underground into the impervious layer.

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