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ЛО-21 Чистяков_Микробиология

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The graph represents how students between 12 and 19 years old communicated from November 2006 to September 2009. The main idea that can be seen in the graph is that across the timeline students started to use text messages more often than emails. The number of people using calls on cell phones and talking face-to-face stayed the same with some fluctuation. The percent of all teenagers who used text messages grew from around 30% in November 2006 to almost 60% in September 2009. Email started with 15% in November 2006 and declined to 10%. Calls on cell phones remained constant/stayed the same at 35%. Face-to-face talks remained at 30% betweenNovember 2006 and September 2009 with some fluctuation between 28% and 40%, with a 40% peak in November 2007.

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