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The bar charts shows the results of a Greek survet from two selected age groups in 2003 on the relative importance of five factors in choosing a career

The bar charts shows the results of a Greek survet from two selected age groups in 2003 on the relative importance of five factors in choosing a career obKr9

The bar charts illustrates the results of a Greek survey from two selected age groups in 2003 on the relative importance of five factors in choosing a career. In chart, we can see significant rise in teacher, friends and parents approximately 3-7 percent. But also we have marked decline in money in 40-50 age about 8 percent. Again we have decrease in role models but in this time we have a little decrease about 4 percent. Overall, we can say parents are the main reasons for choosing a career at the age of 40-50 years

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 the results of a Greek survey from two selected age groups in 2003 on the relative importance of five factors in choosing a career.

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see
 significant rise in teacher, friends and parents approximately 3-7 percent. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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also
 we have marked decline in money in 40-50 age about 8 percent. Again we have decrease in role models This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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little
 decrease about 4 percent.

Overall
, we can say parents are the main reasons for choosing a career at the age of 40-50 years