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The bar chart shows the percentage of UK residents interested in six different sports, in three years (1995, 2000 and 2005).

The bar chart shows the percentage of UK residents interested in six different sports, in three years (1995, 2000 and 2005). n1kLE
The rendered bar graph illustrates the information about the percentum of individuals who indulged in six various games in UK in three distinct years in 1995, 2000, 2005. Looking into details, the highest number of masses preferred to play football in all years with the percentage of just below 40 to approximately 45% till 2005. While 20% of individuals were interested in swimming in 1995 which surged upto 27 in 2000 but the proportion was 25 in 2005. However, it can be witnessed that 23, 18 and 25 percent of people prefered to play rugby in 1995, 2000 and 2005, respectively. Switching to remaining details, the percentile was almost similar in terms of golf preference among masses in 21st century while it was bit highest in late 90s. Although, equal number of people played tennis in 2000 and following year but in 1995 the proportion was almost 30. Further, snooker witnessed least players in 2000 and highest in 1995 with 25% and 30%, respectively. From overall analysis, highest number of people preferred to play in 1995 and lowest in 2000 except football and swimming.
The rendered bar graph illustrates the information about the
percentum
of individuals who indulged in six various games in UK in three distinct years in 1995, 2000, 2005.

Looking into
details
, the highest number of masses preferred to play football in all years with the percentage of
just
below 40 to approximately 45% till 2005. While 20% of individuals
were interested
in swimming in 1995 which surged
upto
27 in 2000
but
the proportion was 25 in 2005.
However
, it can
be witnessed
that 23, 18 and 25 percent of
people
prefered
to play rugby in 1995, 2000 and 2005,
respectively
.

Switching to remaining
details
, the percentile was almost similar in terms of golf preference among masses in 21st century while it was
bit
highest in late 90s. Although, equal number of
people
played tennis in 2000 and following year
but
in 1995 the proportion was almost 30.
Further
, snooker witnessed
least
players in 2000 and highest in 1995 with 25% and 30%,
respectively
.

From
overall
analysis,
highest
number of
people
preferred to play in 1995 and lowest in 2000 except football and swimming.
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