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The diagram below demonstrate to the pacific ocean center have the numerous types island and volcanic rocks stages

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The diagram below demonstrate to the
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pacific ocean
center have the numerous

types island and volcanic rocks stages

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new volcanic systems and how
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island create to the plethora types islands

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pacific ocean
illustrate to the oldest volcanic date’s is back of the 80 million years.

Secondly
, under the rock have the eruption process
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have here originating

2883 KM down.
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more
over, that
is gone
to the hot spot spume remains static.

After its is convert to the magma spume and it gone to the mountain top.
Also


top of the rock youngest volcano develops and built up various eruptions.
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more the pacific plate
is gone
round to the
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left
side and direction of shift of the

pacific tectonic plate its in 7 to 9 Cm per year.
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