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Export earnings from various categories from 2015 to 2016

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The bar chart illustrates the changes in the percentage of the country's export in 5 various categories between 2015 and 2016. Overall, we can see that from 2015 to 2016 revenue from exports has been increased marginally for all the categories with the exception of gems and jewelry which had a minor decline over the period. To begin with, Petroleum products had the highest returns of over 60 billion in 2015 followed by engineered goods which had around 55 billion and these two shared the top spot in 2016 with tallying up more than 63 billion with a growth rate of 3% and 8. 5% respectively. Though textile exports had the lowest revenue in 2015, had the highest growth rate of 15. 24% and rose to more than 30 billion and equaled agricultural products in 2016, which had the minimum increase in the rate by 0. 81% from 2015 to 2016. In contrast, with earnings over 40 billion in 2015 gems and jewelry faced a slight decline by 5. 18% in the latter year.
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in the percentage of the country's export in 5 various categories between 2015 and 2016.

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that from 2015 to 2016 revenue from exports has
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with, Petroleum products had the highest returns of over 60
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in 2015 followed by engineered
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which had around 55
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and these two shared the top spot in 2016 with tallying up more than 63
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with a growth rate of 3% and 8. 5%
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. Though textile exports had the lowest revenue in 2015, had the highest growth rate of 15. 24% and rose to more than 30
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and equaled agricultural products in 2016, which had the minimum increase in the rate by 0. 81% from 2015 to 2016.
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, with earnings over 40
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in 2015 gems and jewelry faced a slight decline by 5. 18% in the latter year.
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IELTS academic Export earnings from various categories from 2015 to 2016

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