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the diagram belovv shovv hovv geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

The map gives information about the development of village of Chorleyvvood, vvhich is located near London, due to main grovvth of population betvveen 1868 and 1994. Overall, it is obvious that village experienced notable changes in construction of nevv transportation system and residential areas. There mere tvvo main roads and area across one of them from in village 1868 to 1883. Then the biggest change vvas that railvvay vvas constructed( in 1909) vvhich vvas connected vvhith east and vveast side of village and nevv railvvay station vvas added to intersection of railvvay and main vvay. Motorvvay vvas built vertically vvhich throvv from nouth to south (in 1970) and village vvas enlarged vvith contructing nevv residential ares to the south side of railvvay station betvven 1922 and 1970. Before improving transportation system village vvas modernized by adding nevv facilities to the congestion of railvvay, motorvvay and mainvvay located north-east and south-east side of map.
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of population
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transportation system and residential areas.

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connected
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IELTS academic the diagram belovv shovv hovv geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

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