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The diagram above shows us how the stages in painting a vehicle.

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The diagram above shows us how the stages in painting a vehicle. the numerous steps involved in the stages in painting a vehicle before they are turned into assembling process. The first step is to, the car that has been out of welding, will enter the phosphatization process. Then it will enter the electrocoat stage before baking in the oven with 30 minutes at a temperature of 170 -180 °C. After that vehicle is given a surface primer and then in the baking again in the oven for 30 minutes at 180°C to produce a base coating. The car will then be heated to a lower temperature than before, which is 80 oC for 30 minutes to produce a clear the coating, then reheated at a higher temperature than before of 160 oC within 30 minutes, and the process is complete and then ready to be used for the next assembly process.
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step is to, the car that has been out of welding, will enter the phosphatization process. Then it will enter the
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stage
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before
baking in the oven with 30 minutes at a temperature of 170 -180 °C. After that vehicle is
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given
a surface primer and then in the baking again in the oven for 30 minutes at
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180°C
to produce a base coating. The car will then
be heated
to a lower temperature than
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, which is 80
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oC
for 30 minutes to produce a
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clear
the coating, then reheated at a higher temperature than
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of 160
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oC
within 30 minutes, and the process is complete and then ready to be
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assembly process.
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