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The pie chart gives the information about population in 1900 and 2000.

The pie chart gives the information about population in 1900 and 2000. 2raw6
The given pie charts illustrates the population in various parts of world, in billions, in the time periods of 1900 and 2000. Overall, Asia constitutes more than half of the world’s population in both the given time periods. Although in 1900, Latin America was accounted for the least population. On the contrary, the least number of people were accounted in North America, in 2000. In 2000, the summation of population was four times that of 1900. The initial accounted percentage of global population was 60 percent for Asia, which declined to 54 percent in 2000. Europe contributed the most of population after Asia. Europe’s contribution was 25% in 1900 and it declined to 14% whereas North America stagnantly constitutes 5 percent of global population. Africa and Latin America were the least contributing countries, accounted for about 4 and 3 percent respectively. There were some major developments and the popluation reached up to 10% and 6 percent. There were some other countries of the world, which accounted for 3 percent in 1900 and 2000.
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pie charts illustrates the
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in various parts of world, in billions, in the time periods of 1900 and 2000.

Overall
, Asia constitutes more than half of the world’s
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population
in both the
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time periods. Although in 1900, Latin America was
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for the least
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population
.
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, the least number of
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people
were
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in North America, in 2000.

In 2000, the summation of
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population
was four times that of 1900. The initial
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percentage of global
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was 60
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percent
for Asia, which declined to 54
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in 2000. Europe contributed the most of
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population
after Asia. Europe’s contribution was 25% in 1900 and it declined to 14% whereas North America
stagnantly
constitutes 5
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percent
of global population.

Africa and Latin America were the least contributing countries,
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accounted
for about 4 and 3
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percent
respectively
. There were
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major developments and the
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reached up to 10% and 6
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. There were
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other countries of the world, which
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for 3
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in 1900 and 2000.
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