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The table delineates the proportion of the Australians who visited the cinema as well as the number of average visits on all age groups, while the line graph shows how many visits to the movies on average by four different age brackets between 1996 and 2000. Overall, it is readily apparent that the percentage of citizens in Australia who visited the cinema saw a significant increase in thefirst a year and then plateaued over the rest of the period shown, whereas the frequency of average visits rose clearly in the initial year then fell dramatically and remained roughly the same over the remaining years. It can also be seen that there were similar fluctuation patterns among fourvarious age groups. Regarding the cinema visits table, in 1996, 62% of the Australian population went to the cinema, after which it went up to 72 % just one year later. A similar pattern could be seen in the mean number of movie visits, with its figure rising from 10. 3 to 11. 1. Although the data of the percentage of Australian film attendance stayed almost unchanged from 1997 to 2000, the average record of visiting frequency experienced a huge drop to merely 8. 3 and then stabilized towards the end. Turning to the movie visits based on the age range line graph, the figures of Australian people aged 14 to 24 and those aged between 25 and 35 were always the highest over the whole period. While 35-to-49-year-olds ranked second, the number of visits of people aged over 50 was always the lowest. It is noticeable that all four distinct age categories reached peaks in the years 1997 and 1999 (at somewhere between 17 and 23 visits), and they all fell to bottoms in 1996, 1998 and 2000 (at around 10 to 15 units).

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