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The descripted two pie charts depict the domiciliary energy usage of Australian people by means of the household appliances and the amount of detrimental gases caused by each direction of energy use.

The descripted two pie charts depict the domiciliary energy usage of Australian people by means of the household appliances and the amount of detrimental gases caused by each direction of energy use. 15bWn
The first chart shows that while the heating requires the highest utilization of energy power, controversely, cooling system is the appliance demanding the lowest rate of energy as 2% and also manufacturing the minimum amount of greenhouse gases. Water heating stands out in the second highest place with one third percentage in the side of energy usage, although it is the most detrimental appliance that produce the most of the greenhouse gas emissions. According to the proportions of energy use, three direction such as the refrigeration, lighting and other appliances cause approximately two times more gas emissions than the quantity of energy utilization of those devices. Overall, it seems that depending on variations on the rate of household energy use, the dose of greenhouse gas emissions revealing to the atmosphere changes and that dependence between usage of energy and percentage of gases can be inversely proportional in certain directions.
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that while the heating requires the highest utilization of
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controversely
, cooling system is the appliance demanding the lowest rate of
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as 2% and
also
manufacturing the minimum amount of greenhouse gases. Water heating stands out in the second highest place with one third percentage in the side of
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energy
usage, although it is the most detrimental appliance that produce the most of the greenhouse gas emissions.

According to the proportions of
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energy
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use
, three direction such as the refrigeration, lighting and other appliances cause approximately two times more gas emissions than the quantity of
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energy
utilization of those devices.

Overall
, it seems that depending on variations on the rate of household
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energy
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use
, the dose of greenhouse gas emissions revealing to the atmosphere
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changes
and that dependence between usage of
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energy
and percentage of gases can be
inversely
proportional in certain directions.
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IELTS academic The descripted two pie charts depict the domiciliary energy usage of Australian people by means of the household appliances and the amount of detrimental gases caused by each direction of energy use.

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