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The data bellow illustrates information about the UK participation in varies sports of men and women from 2005/6 to 2008/9.

The data bellow illustrates information about the UK participation in varies sports of men and women from 2005/6 to 2008/9. KaDk

The data bellow illustrates information about the UK participation in varies sports of men and women from 2005/6 to 2008/9. The units are given in percentage. Overall, it can be seen that most women took part in indoor swimming and diving. As for men, It is noticeable that cycling was their main preference. While jogging was the least popular among both genders. In 2008/9, participation in cycling among men was higher with a rise to 14. 4% from 12. 7% in 2005/6. By contrast, there was a slightly drop in cycling among woman from 7. 0% in 2005/6 to 6. 4% in 2008/9. For indoor swimming or diving, The involvement of male decrease with a smaller proportion from 13. 3% to 13. 0% than women with 18. 0% to 16. 5% over the period. By comparison, there was a greater proportion of men than woman engagement in jogging, cross-country and road running with male participation moderately improve from 6. 9% to 7. 6% compare to a drop from 3. 5 to 4. 8% among woman.

The data bellow illustrates information about the UK participation in varies sports of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
men
 and women Nonstandard phrase. Did you mean: "from 2005 to 6"?from 2005 to 6
from 2005/6
 to 2008/9. The units are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 in percentage.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that most women This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participated
took part
 in indoor swimming and diving. As for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
men
, It is noticeable that cycling was their main preference. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 jogging was the least popular among both genders.

In 2008/9, participation in cycling among You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
men
 was higher with a rise to 14. 4% from 12. 7% in 2005/6. By contrast, there was a You used an adverb ('slightly') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('drop') instead of another adjective.
slightly drop
 in cycling among woman from 7. 0% in 2005/6 to 6. 4% in 2008/9. For indoor swimming or diving, The involvement of male decrease with a smaller proportion from 13. 3% to 13. 0% than women with 18. 0% to 16. 5% over the period.  By comparison, there was a greater proportion of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
men
 than woman engagement in jogging, cross-country and road running with male participation moderately
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 from 6. 9% to 7. 6% compare to a drop from 3. 5 to 4. 8% among woman. 