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The cross section below shows Petwood House as it is now and plans for future refurbishment.

The cross section below shows Petwood House as it is now and plans for future refurbishment. 3Ae5l
These two cross-sectional maps give information about how the project of Petwood House changes is scheduled. Overall, it can clearly be seen that there will be many changes to renew the house. The living is increase, whereas the bathroom is arranged to replaced the attic on the left which is used to store objects in house. Besides that, there will be an addition of study room and the bedroom is going to be removed to the attic on the right. At the same time, the garage will be cut down on size to have space for a storage. Looking at the first cross section for more details, it is evident that on the right of the house, there is a small bathroom and a living room, which is next to it on the ground floor. At the same floor on the right, that is a kitchen, which is on the left of the garage outside. Going to the first floor, there are two bedroom which are separated by a corridor. Next to the bedroom on the left is a shower room. Under the roof of the house, two attics are built for storing, one is on the left and one is on the right. Turning to the second section, it can be seen that there is an increase in the living room size. The bathroom will be demolished, where a games room is set up to be added underneath. On the right at the ground floor, the kitchen and garage are remained unchanged but there will be a small storage between them and the garage will be restricted. On the left of the first floor, the bed room and shower room are in the same situation as before. However, the bed room on the right is planned to damaged and replaced by a study room. On the attic which is used to store items, are going to be renewed. On the left will be a bathroom which is used to be on the ground floor and the opposite side is a place for bedroom.
These two cross-sectional maps give information about how the project of
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