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the comparison of value between fuel and selected exports

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The graph showed the comparison of value between fuel and selected exports, namely fuel, food, and manufacturing good of a country in 2000-2005 Overall, there is a major different of these tables, which specifically could be seen on the line dynamics of each tables. The export value of fuel, had decreased constantly between 2000 and 2002. However, fuel the value export of fuel had a significant increasement in 2003, by reaching 35000 million dollars. This moment, moreover, brought the value export of fuel to had a constant increasement until 2005 This dramatic progress, subsequently, could be compared with the value export of manufacturing in the next table, which relatively had inconsistent progress. Manufacturing goods had its constant increasement from 2000 to 2002, before it faced its value export decreasement in 2003. Nevertheless, manufacturing goods started to had a slight increasement in 2004 until 2005. Meanwhile, the value exports of food had constant dynamics
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exports
,
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fuel
, food, and
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manufacturing
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good
of a country in 2000-2005

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of these tables, which
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seen
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, had decreased
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had a significant
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fuel
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increasement
until 2005

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export
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goods
had its constant
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decreasement
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goods
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