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The comparation of the propotion

The comparation of the propotion 70wm3
The charts demonstrate the proportion of government expenditure between 2010 and 2015. The percentage of education hit the highest point at 24% in 2010 The percentage of other government expenditure hit a low at 1% in 2010 The proportion of transport and culture and leisure were roughly similar, with 3% and 2% respectively in 2010 The percentage of healthcare was greater than that of defence of 2% in 2010 The percentage of other government expenditure, culture and leisure and transport were roughly similar at 1% in 2015 The proportion of pensions remained stable at 19% in 2015 There was a slight increase to 13% in the percentage of welfare in 2015 2015 saw a mild downward trend of 1% in the proportion of healthcare
The charts demonstrate the
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expenditure between 2010 and 2015.

The
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of education hit the highest point at 24% in 2010

The
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of other
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expenditure hit a low at 1% in 2010

The
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of transport and culture and leisure were roughly similar, with 3% and 2%
respectively
in 2010

The
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of healthcare was greater than that of
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defence
of 2% in 2010

The
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of other
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expenditure, culture and leisure and transport were roughly similar at 1% in 2015

The
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of pensions remained stable at 19% in 2015

There was a slight increase to 13% in the
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of welfare in 2015

2015
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a mild downward trend of 1% in the
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of healthcare

IELTS academic The comparation of the propotion

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