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The table shows the average life expectancy for males and females in 1990, 1950 and 2000. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table illustrates the life existence of people in three different time periods from 5 countries. All in all, the most notable information in all the countries, females generally lived longer than men, and in the majority of cases, the gap between the genders increased from the beginning to the end, the figures gradually increasing in the favor of females. the countries that had the longest average life span in 2000 were Norway and Italy, furthermore, Poland has also carried probably the same statistics as compared to the other nations, for both males and females, with the figures of 73% and 79. 4% respectively. Moreover, the remaining countries France and Norway generated almost the same facts and figures in the years 1900, 1950, and 2000 as well, the figures were 63. 0 and 68. 0 respectively, At last, it can be seen, those polish people had the highest life expectancy for the genders and for all the time periods as compared to the other countries.
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that had the longest average life span in 2000 were Norway and Italy,
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of 73% and 79. 4%
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France and Norway generated almost the same facts and
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in the years 1900, 1950, and 2000
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were 63. 0 and 68. 0
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