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changes in percentage of population in urban areas

the graph shows figures about percentage of population living in urban areas in 6 different countries of the world. According to the chart, we can observe that the population from 1950 to 2007 is almost doubled in Latin America/ Caribben, Africa and Asia. Where as in Europe, North America and Oceania the change is only small amount compared to the rest of the countries. Also we can projected increase in Asia, Europe and Africa from 1950 to 2050. We can observe that percentage has increase at same period of 25 %. In Europe the change from 2007 to 2050 is small when compared to 1950 to 2007. By 2050, 90% of the population started living urban areas in North and Latin America.

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