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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The climograph provides us with the information of of the annual statistics of precipitaion and temprature in Kolkata. The graph demonstrates the change of temperature and it shows us that most of the year's the tempreature climbs over 25 degree celsuis. It is clear that between January and May, the temprature leapt from 20 degree celsuis to reach above 30 degree celsuis. However, through the other months the temperature slipt back to reach almost 20 degree celsuis. The precipitation of the waterfall was also shown in the climograph. It is very clear that the rainfall at the begging of the year is too low starting in January with less than 50 millimeters. The rainfall then starts to increase gradually until May, the period after May we can see the significant change in the rainfall that jumped from 100 millimeters to 250 millimeters. During the last two months the rainfall drops down dramatically from 150 millimeters until it reaches less than 50 millimeters.
The climograph provides us with the information of of the annual statistics of precipitaion and temprature in Kolkata.

The graph demonstrates the
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of temperature and it
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us that most of the year's the tempreature climbs over 25
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celsuis. It is
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clear
that between January and May, the temprature leapt from 20
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celsuis to reach above 30
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celsuis.
However
, through the other months the temperature slipt back to reach almost 20
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celsuis.

The precipitation of the waterfall was
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shown in the climograph. It is
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that the
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rainfall
at the begging of the year is too low starting in January with less than 50 millimeters. The
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rainfall
then
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starts
to increase
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until May, the period after May we can
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the significant
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in the
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that jumped from 100 millimeters to 250 millimeters. During the last two months the
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drops down
dramatically
from 150 millimeters until it reaches less than 50 millimeters.

IELTS academic The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

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