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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

The diagram depicts the information about the process of manufacturing ethanol fuel from corn. Taking a general overview, there are used nine stages for produced ethanol fuel and then it is transferred for transport of ethanol fuel. It can be clearly seen that first of all corn is collected as raw material, which is main source of this process. After that corn is stored in particular place then it is moved to milled in third stage. Next, corn which is milled moved to cooked for 4 hours with added water. In fifth stage, it is fermented for 48 hours which is four days. Movingfurther, after 4 days corn is separated into liquid and leftover which is called solid by product. Then moved to purified where fuel is purified and it takes five hours for this process. Lastly, ethanol fuel is ready and moved to sorted out then transported to ethanol fuel is required.
The diagram depicts the information about the process of manufacturing
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ethanol
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from corn.

Taking a general overview, there are
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nine stages for produced
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ethanol
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fuel
and then it
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ethanol
fuel.

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that
first
of all
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corn
is collected
as raw material, which is main source of this process. After that
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corn
is stored
in particular
place then it is
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moved
to milled in third stage.
Next
,
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corn
which
is milled
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moved
to cooked for 4 hours with
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added
water. In fifth stage, it
is fermented
for 48 hours which is four days.

Movingfurther, after 4 days
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corn
is separated
into liquid and leftover which
is called
solid by product. Then
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moved
to purified where
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fuel
is purified
and it takes five hours for this process.
Lastly
,
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ethanol
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fuel
is ready and
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moved
to sorted out then transported to
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fuel
is required
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

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