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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

The pie charts illustrate the income of a poll that requested visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel services related to customers. This survey was conducted among 100 guests in two years, 2005 and 2010. Overall, it is evident that most visitors were satisfied with offered services in 2005, whereas the percentage of people who felt good accounted for the highest number in 2010. In 2005, the largest proportion was related to being satisfied with customer services with 45%, while this figure was lower at 17% in 2010. 14% of guests chose a good item. However, It experienced a dramatic increase (39%) five years later. Excellent item in the poll was selected by merely 5% of visitors in 2005, rising to 28% by 2010. The percentage of people who opt for very poor and poor items were 15% and 21%, respectively. These figures decline moderately by 11% and 10%, respectively.
The pie charts illustrate the income of a poll that requested visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel services related to customers. This survey
was conducted
among 100 guests in two years, 2005 and 2010.

Overall
, it is evident that most visitors
were satisfied
with offered services in 2005, whereas the percentage of
people
who felt
good
accounted for the highest number in 2010.

In 2005, the largest proportion
was related
to
being satisfied
with customer services with 45%, while this figure was lower at 17% in 2010. 14% of guests chose a
good
item.
However
, It experienced a dramatic increase (39%) five years later. Excellent item in the poll
was selected
by
merely
5% of visitors in 2005, rising to 28% by 2010. The percentage of
people
who opt for
very
poor and poor items were 15% and 21%,
respectively
. These figures decline
moderately
by 11% and 10%,
respectively
.

IELTS academic The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
153 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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