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Customer Service of Parkway Hotel

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The given pie charts illustrate the reviews from guests of Parkway Hotel related to the hotel’s customer service. There are two charts present by 100 guests in 2005 and 2010 for the same questionnaire. At a first glance, there was a large amount of satisfactory at 45% in 2005 and a minority of excellent service at 5% in the same year. Moreover, poor service made up a fixity of the whole chart. On the other hand, the proportion of very poor and good assisatnce were almost the same through the year of 2005. Seeing the other chart. The position of excellent facility was dramatically has rocketed approximately 6 times, from 5% to 28% in 2010. In addition, the percentage of good amenity accounted for 39% of the year. Beside, there was significant declines of satisfactory service in 2010 at 17%. To sum up the given information, we can see obvious improvements in excellent and good customer service over a period of 5 years compared to the two charts list the results of a questionnaire
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illustrate the reviews from guests of Parkway Hotel related to the hotel’s customer
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. There are two
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present by 100 guests in 2005 and 2010 for the same questionnaire. At a
first
glance, there was a large amount of satisfactory at 45% in 2005 and a minority of excellent
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service
at 5% in the same
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.
Moreover
, poor
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made up a fixity of the whole
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.
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, the proportion of
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poor and
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were almost the same through the
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of 2005.

Seeing the other
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. The position of excellent facility was
dramatically
has rocketed approximately 6 times, from 5% to 28% in 2010.
In addition
, the percentage of
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good
amenity accounted for 39% of the
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. Beside,
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of satisfactory
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service
in 2010 at 17%.

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information, we can
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obvious improvements in excellent and
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customer
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over a period of 5 years compared to the two
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list the results of a questionnaire
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IELTS academic Customer Service of Parkway Hotel

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  American English
3 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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