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The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages. Jo6wa
The diagram illustrates that the two different forms of English used all around the world. Those English were categorised as American English branch and British English branch. Overall, it represents which countries are following both branches. On the one hand, we have American English branch which is obviuosly spoken in the American continent like USA, CANADA. Under the influence of USA some regions such as Philipines, West coast and so on using the American English rather than British. On the other hand, British English branch which is spoken intially on the British continent. But, later this branch accepted and used in the countries including West Indies, Africa, Indian-Pakistan, China and finally in Australia. While comparing these two branches according to the details depicted in the picture, it is clearly understandable that British English branch covered more continents than that of American English branch. That is the number regions using the British English branch is considerably higher. To conclude this, both the English branches are covering alomst all the parts of the english speaking countries. British English is being spoken in most regions and their way of style is being used highly.
The diagram illustrates that the two
different
forms of English
used
all around the world. Those English were
categorised
as American English
branch
and British English
branch
.
Overall
, it represents which countries are following both branches.

On the one hand, we have American English
branch
which is
obviuosly
spoken in the American continent
like USA
, CANADA. Under the influence
of USA
some
regions such as
Philipines
, West coast and
so
on using the American English
rather
than British.
On the other hand
, British English
branch
which
is spoken
intially
on the British continent.
But
, later this
branch
accepted
and
used
in the countries including West Indies, Africa, Indian-Pakistan, China and
finally
in Australia. While comparing these two
branches
according to the
details
depicted in the picture, it is
clearly
understandable that British English
branch
covered more continents than that of American English
branch
.
That is
the number regions using the British English
branch
is
considerably
higher.

To conclude
this, both the English
branches
are covering
alomst
all the parts of the
english
speaking countries. British English is
being spoken
in most regions and their way of style is being
used
highly
.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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