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The information regarding the distinct four nations where how much oil was produced per day in consecutive years 2002 to 2004 has depicted in the table. At a first glance, in 2000, the production ratio of oil per day was 205000 in Nigeria and the same year chad was generation 0% oil but conga accounted for the highest oil production that was 275000 and Somalia was only 5000. However, Nigeria and conga were dropped in next year which was 201000 and 234000 respectively while Somalia increased by 3000 per day to 8000. Observing further, it is noticed that chad generated 0% oil per day in first three years and that country was produced less oil as compared to other nations in 2003 and 2004 it was 8000 and 5000 respectively. Congo showed a decreasing trend in all years in 2000 it was 222000 then it was fall 221 5000 in 2003 as compared to Somalia showed an increasing trend in last year it reached at 50,000. In 2003 Nigar was generation 210000 while that day but in 2004 it was boom by 300

The information regarding the distinct four nations where how much oil was produced per day in consecutive years 2002 to 2004 has depicted in the table. At a first glance, in 2000, the production ratio of oil per day was 205000 in Nigeria and the same year chad was generation 0% oil but conga accounted for the highest oil production that was 275000 and Somalia was only 5000. However, Nigeria and conga were dropped in next year which was 201000 and 234000 respectively while Somalia increased by 3000 per day to 8000. Observing further, it is noticed that chad generated 0% oil per day in first three years and that country was produced less oil as compared to other nations in 2003 and 2004 it was 8000 and 5000 respectively. Congo showed a decreasing trend in all years in 2000 it was 222000 then it was fall 221 5000 in 2003 as compared to Somalia showed an increasing trend in last year it reached at 50, 000. In 2003 Nigar was generation 210000 while that day but in 2004 it was boom by 300 2bQRj
The information regarding the distinct four nations where how much oil was produced per day in consecutive years 2002 to 2004 has depicted in the table. At a first glance, in 2000, the production ratio of oil per day was 205000 in Nigeria and the same year chad was generation 0% oil but conga accounted for the highest oil production that was 275000 and Somalia was only 5000. However, Nigeria and conga were dropped in next year which was 201000 and 234000 respectively while Somalia increased by 3000 per day to 8000. Observing further, it is noticed that chad generated 0% oil per day in first three years and that country was produced less oil as compared to other nations in 2003 and 2004 it was 8000 and 5000 respectively. Congo showed a decreasing trend in all years in 2000 it was 222000 then it was fall 221 5000 in 2003 as compared to Somalia showed an increasing trend in last year it reached at 50, 000. In 2003 Nigar was generation 210000 while that day but in 2004 it was boom by 3000 and reached 213000. Overall, less oil produced in chad as compare to other nation and the striking feature of the chart is conga where more oil generated.
The information regarding the distinct four nations where how much
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oil
was produced
per day in consecutive years 2002 to 2004 has depicted in the table.

At a
first
glance, in 2000, the production ratio of
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oil
per day was 205000 in Nigeria and the same
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year
chad was generation 0%
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oil
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but
conga accounted for the highest
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production that was 275000 and Somalia was
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only
5000.
However
, Nigeria and conga
were dropped
in
next
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which was 201000 and 234000
respectively
while Somalia increased by 3000 per day to 8000.

Observing
further
, it
is noticed
that chad generated 0%
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oil
per day in
first
three years and that country
was produced
less
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oil
as compared to other nations in 2003 and 2004 it was 8000 and 5000
respectively
. Congo
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showed
a decreasing trend in all years in 2000 it was 222000 then it was fall 221 5000 in 2003 as compared to Somalia
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an increasing trend in last
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it reached at 50, 000. In 2003
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Nigar
was generation 210000 while that day
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in 2004 it was
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boom
by 3000 and reached 213000.

Overall
, less
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oil
produced in chad as compare to other nation and the striking feature of the chart is conga where more
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generated.
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IELTS academic The information regarding the distinct four nations where how much oil was produced per day in consecutive years 2002 to 2004 has depicted in the table. At a first glance, in 2000, the production ratio of oil per day was 205000 in Nigeria and the same year chad was generation 0% oil but conga accounted for the highest oil production that was 275000 and Somalia was only 5000. However, Nigeria and conga were dropped in next year which was 201000 and 234000 respectively while Somalia increased by 3000 per day to 8000. Observing further, it is noticed that chad generated 0% oil per day in first three years and that country was produced less oil as compared to other nations in 2003 and 2004 it was 8000 and 5000 respectively. Congo showed a decreasing trend in all years in 2000 it was 222000 then it was fall 221 5000 in 2003 as compared to Somalia showed an increasing trend in last year it reached at 50, 000. In 2003 Nigar was generation 210000 while that day but in 2004 it was boom by 300

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