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The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. MjYa
The chart illustrate how various causes influent the pollution of atmosfere in four different country during 2021. Overall, the most polluted air is reveled in China and the greatest of this pollution is created by industries. The country with the cleanest air is Australia that has relatively low range of pollution in all the three indicators. In China and in Japan, industry has the highest contribute to increase their air pollution with an apport of 80 PPM in China and below of 40 PPM in Japan. Otherwise, in America and in Australia this category give the lowest apport of pollution, relatively 29 PPM and 18 PPM. In America transport are by far the most consistent intake of pollution with 58 PPM. Australia has the more elevated income of pollution from the electricity generation while all the other three countries have the lower income from thet field.
The chart illustrate how various causes
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pollution
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atmosfere
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country during 2021.

Overall
, the most polluted air
is reveled
in China and the greatest of this
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pollution
is created
by industries. The country with the cleanest air is Australia that has
relatively
low range of
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pollution
in all the three indicators.

In China and in Japan, industry has the highest
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contribute
to increase their air
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pollution
with an
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apport
of 80 PPM in China and below of 40 PPM in Japan.
Otherwise
, in America and in Australia this category give the lowest
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apport
of
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pollution
,
relatively
29 PPM and 18 PPM.

In America transport are by far the most consistent intake of
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pollution
with 58 PPM.

Australia has the more elevated income of
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pollution
from the electricity generation while all the other three countries have the lower income from
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field.

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