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The tables below give the distirbution of world populatiom in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comprasions where relevant.

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The tables indicates the distribution of world population between 1950 and 2000 with a prediction estimate of the circumstance in 2050. Overall, every area has its own percentage of the amount for years in the tables. Areas amounts have changed by years. Although, they have some fluctuations, still, they amount of percentages had increased, and, it is predicting to be more rate by 2050. İn Africa, the percentage was 9 % and 13 % between 1950 and 2000 respectively. İt is expecting to be reaching 20 % by 2050. Asia, had the most amount of percentage with 56 % and 60 % in 1950 and 2000. İt is supposted to be 59 % in 2050. Europe, even though europe had some ripples, it was still on the top of the amount of percentage. İt had 22 % and 12 % in 1950 and 2000. İt is supposed to decrease to 7 % in 2050. Latin America had a small amount of percentage throughout the years. İt was 6 % and 9 % by 1950 and 2000, and, it is expecting to be 4 % in 2050. North America had its own percentage's fluctations as well, with 7% and 5 % between 1950 and 2000, and, predicting to up to 9 % in 2050. The last is Oceania was more stable than others. That was 1 % both 1950 and 2000, and, supposed to be the same amount by 2050.
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IELTS academic The tables below give the distirbution of world populatiom in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050.

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