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The graph below gives information about the wheat production of different countries and their cultivable land area

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The bar graph lilustrat the wheat making in 6 country in their farming areas. Overall it can be seen that Australia is the highest cultivable land area and China is the maxima amount of wheat productTo begin with the Russia is the list amount of farmland available also around 9% of the wheat produc, moreoverAustralia is lead the farming area in 6 different countries to contrast a small amount of wheat productionl. furthermore United States of America is roughly one quarter of farming land available and wheat production is a small as rassi around 9%. As well as India is second highest farming area available in 6 different countries in the same way wheat product is also second position in the 6 different countries in additionally china is 21% product the wheat and a small minority of cultivable land mass available.
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