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The use of energy in a medium rate Australian house and the share of greenhouse gas emissions stem from the different energy use headings are indicated in the pie charts.

The use of energy in a medium rate Australian house and the share of greenhouse gas emissions stem from the different energy use headings are indicated in the pie charts. BJM9X
The use of energy in a medium rate Australian house and the share of greenhouse gas emissions stem from the different energy use headings are indicated in the pie charts. Overall, heating takes the highest part of energy use meanwhile it shows a significant drop in the greenhouse gas emissions. The use of energy of water heating shows the second highest amount and the greenhouse gas emissions of it displays almost similar share with more than a quarter share. Cooling is in the same pattern with the water heating energy use and greenhouse gas emissions of water heating. Both of their emissions indicate a little higher amount than the use. On the other hand, the greenhouse gas emissions that refrigeration and lighting ensure doubles their required energy use. The energy use of other appliances shows a considerable portion but, the greenhouse gas emission stem from other appliances almost two times higher than the use.
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IELTS academic The use of energy in a medium rate Australian house and the share of greenhouse gas emissions stem from the different energy use headings are indicated in the pie charts.

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