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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. GQVm
The provided bar graph illustrates global exports of pineapple by the three biggest producers of it in two years, 2009 and 2019; while, pie chart represents distribution of price in different factors for customers per pineapple in 2019. Overall, exports of pineapple decreased in only one nation; whereas, in other two countries, it increased in 2019. The largest part of cost covered in distribution; however, the smallest part in export costs in 2019. To begin with, country A exported approximately 1 million metric ton pineapple in 2009, which was dramatically rose and reached at just over 10 million metric tons. On the contrary, nation B started at around 4. 3 million metric tons in 2009 and it significantly fell to 1. 7 million metric tons. Moreover, country C exported only approximately 0. 1 million metric tons of pineapple in 2009; this trend was slightly increased by 0. 1 million metric tons. The pie chart provides information about cost distribution in 2019. The biggest part went on distribution and retail. 18% profit was put on each pineapple which was the second highest. Taxes, international transportation costs as well as import licences expenses covered 16%, 12% and 10% respectively. The least cost went on export which was slight loslwer than producer expenses.
The provided bar graph illustrates global
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exports
of pineapple by the three biggest producers of it in two years, 2009 and 2019; while, pie chart represents
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distribution
of price in
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different
factors for customers per pineapple in 2019.

Overall
,
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exports
of pineapple decreased in
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only
one nation; whereas, in other two countries, it increased in 2019. The largest part of
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cost
covered in
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distribution
;
however
, the smallest part in
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export
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costs
in 2019.

To
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begin
with, country A exported approximately 1
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million
metric ton pineapple in 2009, which was
dramatically
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rose
and reached at
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just
over 10
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million
metric tons.
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, nation B
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started
at around 4. 3
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million
metric tons in 2009 and it
significantly
fell to 1. 7
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million
metric tons.
Moreover
, country C exported
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only
approximately 0. 1
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million
metric tons of pineapple in 2009; this trend was
slightly
increased by 0. 1
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million
metric tons.

The pie chart provides information about
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cost
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distribution
in 2019. The biggest part went on
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distribution
and retail. 18% profit
was put
on each pineapple which was the second highest. Taxes, international transportation
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costs
as well
as import
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licences
expenses covered 16%, 12% and 10%
respectively
. The least
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cost
went on
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export
which was slight
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loslwer
than producer expenses.
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IELTS academic The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

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