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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart given shows the details about export trend between different pineapple-producing countries in the year 2009 and 2019. Adding on, the pie chart graphs given is showing the details of breakdown of cost consumer had to pay for one pineapple. The measurement unit of bar chart is in million and for pie chart it is percentage. Overall, export rate of country A had increased exponentially in 2019 as compare to the export rate of 2009. Adding on, negligble growth was shown for the country C. On the contrary, country B showed the complete opposite trend as rapid decline in export rate can be seen in 2019. To begin with, let's look into the big chunks which had major cost coverage in the breakdown of each pine-apple. First and foremost, Distribution & retails had 35% of share in the pine-apple cost followed by the profit which stands at 18%. Adding on, Taxes regulated by the Government was not far behind as taxes takes 16% for each pineapple. Furthermore, now let's look into the area which had small cuts in the overall cost of pineapple. Primarily, export costs were as low as 4% followed by producer which just take 5%. To continue, international transport & Import licenses were not so good not so bad as both of these sectors charge 12 % & 10% of share respectively.
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pineapple-producing
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in the year 2009 and 2019. Adding on, the pie
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consumer had to pay for one pineapple. The measurement unit of bar
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and for pie
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it is percentage.

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export
rate of
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A had increased
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rate of 2009. Adding on,
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the complete opposite trend as rapid decline in
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rate can be
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chunks which had major
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coverage in the breakdown of each pine-apple.
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followed by the profit which stands at 18%. Adding on, Taxes regulated by the
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was not far behind as taxes takes 16% for each pineapple.

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of pineapple.
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were as low as 4% followed by producer which
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take 5%. To continue, international transport & Import licenses were not
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as both of these sectors charge 12 % & 10% of share
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IELTS academic The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

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