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The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows a schematic illustration of the brick manufacturing process for the building industry. Overall, the complete process takes about four to seven days or approximately 96 to 168 hours in total from start to finish. There are three main steps involved in this manufacturing process: first, there is the conversion of clay to bricks, second, there is the drying and cooling of bricks, and finally, the packaging and delivery of the bricks. The first step in this process involves transforming ordinary clay into building bricks. This is done by extracting clay from the earth using a commercial digger. Once the clay is dug up, the solid particles are hoisted on a metal grid, which separates the sediment onto a roller. These sifted particles are then mixed with sand and water and poured into a concrete mould to form bricks that can be eventually used for building. A wire cutter is then used to cut the bricks into rectangular shapes. The second part of the brick manufacturing process involves drying and cooling the newly formed bricks. After the bricks are formed, they are put into a drying oven for about 24 to 48 hours. Once the bricks are dried, they are put into two kilns. The first kiln uses moderate heat at 200 to 980 degree Celsius, whereas, the second kiln uses high heat at 870 to 1, 300 degrees Celsius. Because there are two kilns used in the drying process, it ensures that the bricks are formed and ready for the next step. Since the bricks have been double blasted with heat, the bricks are put in the cooling chamber for an additional 48 to 72 hours until they are at a stable temperature. The final step involves the packaging and delivery of the bricks. After the cooling stage, the bricks are packaged well and loaded into multiple delivery trucks to be sent across the country to different consumer areas. In conclusion, the process of brick manufacturing involves three major steps that are necessary for building strong building materials that are also safe for consumer use.
The diagram
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shows
a schematic illustration of the
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brick
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manufacturing
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process
for the
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building
industry.
Overall
, the complete
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process
takes about four to seven days or approximately 96 to 168 hours in total from
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start
to finish.

There are three main
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steps
involved in this
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manufacturing
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process
:
first
, there is the conversion of
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clay
to
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bricks
, second, there is the
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drying
and
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cooling
of
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bricks
, and
finally
, the packaging and delivery of the bricks.

The
first
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step
in this
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process
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involves
transforming ordinary
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clay
into
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building
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bricks
. This
is done
by extracting
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clay
from the earth using a commercial digger. Once the
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clay
is dug
up, the solid particles
are hoisted
on a metal grid, which separates the sediment onto a roller. These sifted particles are then mixed with sand and water and poured into a concrete
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mould
to form
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bricks
that can be
eventually
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used
for
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building
. A wire cutter is then
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used
to
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cut
the
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bricks
into rectangular shapes.

The second part of the
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brick
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manufacturing
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process
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involves
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drying
and
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cooling
the
newly
formed
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bricks
. After the
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bricks
are formed
, they
are put
into a
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drying
oven for about 24 to 48 hours. Once the
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bricks
are dried
, they
are put
into two
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kilns
. The
first
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kiln
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uses
moderate heat at 200 to 980 degree Celsius, whereas, the second
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kiln
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uses
high heat at 870 to 1, 300 degrees Celsius.
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Because
there are two
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kilns
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used
in the
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drying
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process
, it ensures that the
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bricks
are formed
and ready for the
next
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step
. Since the
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bricks
have been double blasted with heat, the
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bricks
are put
in the
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cooling
chamber for an additional 48 to 72 hours until they are at a stable temperature.

The final
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step
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involves
the packaging and delivery of the
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bricks
. After the
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cooling
stage, the
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bricks
are packaged
well and loaded into multiple delivery trucks to be
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sent
across the country to
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different
consumer areas.

In conclusion
, the
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process
of
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brick
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manufacturing
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involves
three major
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steps
that are necessary for
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building
strong
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building
materials that are
also
safe for consumer
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use
.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

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