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The charts show the sales of new cars in Australia in 1984, 1993 and 2013

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The pie charts compare the figure for new cars sold in Australia in three different years. Overall, it is clear that Sedans was ranked No. 1 in the top of car brands sold during the period. Besides, the years 1984, 1993 and 2013 witnessed a continuous increase in the total number of Australian cars sold. In 1984, the car Sedans had the proportion of 55% in the new car sales before decreasing by 5% to 50% in 1993 and reaching the highest percentage of 57% at the end of the time frame. By contrast the allocation of other car sales rose from 26% in 1984 to 29% in 1993 and fall slightly to 24% in the next 10 years. The period saw a slight fluctuation between 19% and 21% in the sales of SVUs cars, occupying close to one fifth total sales of new cars. In terms of numbers, total sales soared by 20. 000 over the course of 29 years, to the peak of 52. 000 by 2013. With the positive trend, the number of Sedans cars and SVUs ones were consumed more during that that time, with the numbers of Sedans cars of 22. 000 in 1984 and 29. 640 in 2013 and that ones of SVUs in 1984 and 2013 were 6080 and 9880, respectively. While Sedans and SVUs cars were used more prevailing in the community, the figure for others decreased to 12. 480 in 2013 after increasing from 8320 in the beginning course to 1. 760 by 1993.
The pie charts compare the figure for new
cars
sold in Australia in three
different
years.

Overall
, it is
clear
that
Sedans
was ranked
No. 1 in the top of
car
brands sold during the period.
Besides
, the years 1984, 1993 and 2013 witnessed a continuous increase in the total
number
of Australian
cars
sold.

In 1984, the
car
Sedans
had the proportion of 55% in the new
car
sales
before
decreasing by 5% to 50% in 1993 and reaching the highest percentage of 57% at the
end
of the time frame. By contrast the allocation of other
car
sales
rose from 26% in 1984 to 29% in 1993 and fall
slightly
to 24% in the
next
10 years. The period
saw
a slight fluctuation between 19% and 21% in the
sales
of
SVUs
cars
, occupying close to one fifth total
sales
of new cars.

In terms of
numbers
, total
sales
soared by 20. 000 over the course of 29 years, to the peak of 52. 000 by 2013. With the
positive
trend, the
number
of
Sedans
cars
and
SVUs
ones
were consumed
more during that that time, with the
numbers
of
Sedans
cars
of 22. 000 in 1984 and 29. 640 in 2013 and that ones of
SVUs
in 1984 and 2013 were 6080 and 9880,
respectively
. While
Sedans
and
SVUs
cars
were
used
more prevailing in the community, the figure for others decreased to 12. 480 in 2013 after increasing from 8320 in the beginning course to 1. 760 by 1993.
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