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The charts show the number of deaths that have occurred in different countries due to air pollution in the year 2015 and the reasons for the pollution. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The charts show the number of deaths that have occurred in different countries due to air pollution in the year 2015 and the reasons for the pollution. eA7qW
The bar diagram represents the number of deaths that have occurred in different countries due to air pollution in the year 2015. This is accompanied by a pie chart that gives an overview of the various sources causing air pollution. In 2015 there were around 4. 2 million deaths took place in India is due to air pollution, 2. 1 million deaths happened in China, The death rate in China is almost half less than in India. And there are about 0. 82 million deaths occurred in Pakistan, 0. 71 million deaths from Nigeria, 0. 68 million deaths from Indonesia. The number of deaths that took place in Russia and the USA is almost closer 0. 58 million and 0. 56 million. Similarly, The number of deaths that are happened in Congo and Brazil is almost the same 0. 48million and 0. 46 million. Regarding the sources that are causing air pollution in 2015 are Dust and Construction of 45 % which is the major source compared to other sources and it is almost half of the other sources. Another major source is Waste Burning of 17% which is equal to Diesel and Generator and Industries. The other sources are Transport, Diesel and Generator, Industries, and Domestic Cooking which respectively cause 14%, 9%, 8%, and7% of the air pollution, And that is almost equal to the one-third of the total sources which is causing air pollution. From the graph, it is clear that India records the highest number of deaths and Brazil records the lowest number of deaths caused due to air pollution in 2015
The bar diagram represents the
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number
of deaths that have occurred in
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different
countries due to
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air
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pollution
in the year 2015. This
is accompanied
by a pie chart that gives an overview of the various
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sources
causing
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air
pollution.

In 2015 there were around 4. 2
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million
deaths took place in India is due to
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air
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pollution
, 2. 1
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million
deaths happened in China, The death rate in China is
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almost
half less than in India. And there are about 0. 82
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million
deaths occurred in Pakistan, 0. 71
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million
deaths from Nigeria, 0. 68
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million
deaths from Indonesia. The
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number
of deaths that took place in Russia and the USA is
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almost
closer 0. 58
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million
and 0. 56
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million
.
Similarly
, The
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of deaths that
are happened
in Congo and Brazil is
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almost
the same 0.
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48million
and 0. 46 million.

Regarding the
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sources
that are causing
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air
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pollution
in 2015 are Dust and Construction of 45 % which is the major
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source
compared to other
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sources
and it is
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almost
half of the other
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sources
. Another major
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source
is Waste Burning of 17% which is equal to Diesel and Generator and Industries. The other
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sources
are Transport, Diesel and Generator, Industries, and Domestic Cooking which
respectively
cause 14%, 9%, 8%, and7% of the
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air
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pollution
, And
that is
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almost
equal to the one-third of the total
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sources
which is causing
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air
pollution.

From the graph, it is
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clear
that India records the highest
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number
of deaths and Brazil records the lowest
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number
of deaths caused due to
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air
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pollution
in 2015
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IELTS academic The charts show the number of deaths that have occurred in different countries due to air pollution in the year 2015 and the reasons for the pollution.

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