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The charts below show the number of females aged in particular country, who participate in sport , compared people who watching

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A glance at the diagram illustrates some considerable differences and similarities between the percentages of women who participating and watching the competition sport in 2000. It is evident that the figures for watching in the basketball, tennis, gymnastic and horse ricing, racing were higher than the number of participating in that one. Mean while, the number of people who watch and take part in the basketball and tennis were highest as compared to the horse ricing, racing and badminton which were lowest at average level. The subsequent decades, however, experienced dramatic increase to reach a peak at 60 percent when people were watching the tennis rather than the proportion of residents who participated in this sport at 30 percent. In comparison with the basketball which had a suitable rate between watching and taking part in this one, with 55 percent and 50 percent respectively. While the females rates soars to 30 percent among participating in the golf, the percentages of women watching the gymnastic sharply climbed at 20 percent rather than another types. During the horse ricing, racing and the badminton which were lowest at 5 percent and 10 percent respectively.
A glance at the diagram illustrates
some
considerable differences and similarities between the percentages of women who participating and watching the competition sport in 2000.

It is evident that the figures for watching in the basketball, tennis, gymnastic and horse ricing, racing were higher than the number of participating in that one.
Mean while
, the number of
people
who
watch
and
take part
in the basketball and tennis were highest as compared to the horse ricing, racing and badminton which were lowest at average level.

The subsequent decades,
however
, experienced dramatic increase to reach a peak at 60
percent
when
people
were watching the tennis
rather
than the proportion of residents who participated in this sport at 30
percent
.
In comparison
with the basketball which had a suitable rate between watching and taking part in this one, with 55
percent
and 50
percent
respectively
. While the females rates soars to 30
percent
among participating in the golf, the percentages of women watching the gymnastic
sharply
climbed at 20
percent
rather
than another types. During the horse ricing, racing and the badminton which were lowest at 5
percent
and 10
percent
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the number of females aged in particular country, who participate in sport, compared people who watching

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