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The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows us the proportion of one European country's people going to cinemas in weekdays between 2003, 2005 and 2007. The graph illustrates the differences between working days and weekend of people's percentage for going to movie houses. In 2003, the lowest number of cinema lovers was about 10% on Monday, and the highest one was at 40 per cent on Saturday. The most crowed film house was on Saturday, 2005 compared that of 2003 and 2007. However, on Sunday, movie lovers were dipped to 30% from 40% in 2003, 34 per cent from 45 per cent in 2005, and 32% from 42% in 2007. On Monday, very few people were going to watch movies compared to the weekend of every week. While on Friday the same amount of viewers (30%) went to box houses to watch films the other working days were in a fluctuation. In the last two days of the week, Saturday relatively were crowed in cinemas rather than Sunday.
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us the proportion of one European country's
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people
going to cinemas in weekdays between 2003, 2005 and 2007. The graph illustrates the differences between working days and weekend of
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's percentage for going to movie
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.

In 2003, the lowest number of cinema lovers was about 10% on Monday, and the highest one was at 40 per cent on Saturday. The most crowed film
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house
was on Saturday, 2005 compared that of 2003 and 2007.
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, on Sunday, movie lovers
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to 30% from 40% in 2003, 34 per cent from 45 per cent in 2005, and 32% from 42% in 2007.

On Monday,
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few
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were going to
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movies compared to the weekend of every week.
“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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on Friday the same amount of viewers (30%) went to box
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to
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films the other working days were in a fluctuation. In the last two days of the week, Saturday
relatively
were crowed
in cinemas
rather
than Sunday.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.

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