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The chart below show how frequently people in USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013

The rendered bar graph illustrate information regarding the percentage of people who eat in fast food restaurants in America from 2003 - 2013. Overall, the people who went restaurants once a week and twice a month was maximum, in contrast the minimum number of people went everyday and never went to restaurants. In detail, maximum people went rest one a week for eating food in year 2003, meanwhile 30% of people go twice a month, moreover 17% of people went several times in a week for eating. Only, 13% of people went restaurants few times a year, while very tiny proportion of people went everyday and 5% people never went to fast food restaurants for eating. Furthermore, in 2006 the percentage of people who went restaurants once a week increased, but in 2013 it reached to 28%. The percentage of people who went once or twice a month decreased by 5% in 2006 conversely in 2013 it reached to 34%. The percentage of people who went restaurants everyday remain same in year 2006 and 2013. In 2006 the percentage reached to 20% for people who went several times a week.
The rendered bar graph illustrate information regarding the
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IELTS academic The chart below show how frequently people in USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013

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