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The charts show electricity use, local emergency calls and time spent on patients for a group of typical hospitals.

The charts show electricity use, local emergency calls and time spent on patients for a group of typical hospitals. BYYAd

The charts show electricity use, local emergency calls and time spent on patients for a group of typical hospitals. Regarding electricity, we see that consumption in the French and Japanese hospitals is roughly stable during the week, fluctuating around 32 and 18 mw respectively. In Canada and Russia, electricity use climbs dramatically towards the end of the week, going from 26 to 38 mw and from 12 to 24 mw. In Argentina, however, the use actually declines by almost half. There is a similar pattern in the number of emergency calls made, which fluctuate in France (around 90 calls) and Canada (around 110. ) In Canada these calls rise by roughly half, from around 105 on Monday to over 160 on Sunday, with the figure in Russia showing a similar growth to 110 by the weekend. Argentina is again the exception, with a decline of about half. By contrast, time spent on patient assessment is generally stable during the week in all the countries except Russia, where there is a marked rise from Monday’s 12 minutes (which is the typical daily rate of each country except Japan) to 28 minutes on Sunday. In summary, it seems that electricity use may reflect an increase in emergency calls made, but only in Russia does assessment time increase by the same pattern.

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