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The line graph shows the number of different species fish from to 1982 to 2007.

The line graph shows the number of different species fish from to 1982 to 2007. yGGWd

The information about the compares the number of four specious fish around the globe between 1982 and 2007. Overall, it can be evidently seen that the number of Atlantic cod and Yellow fin tuna plummeted over the period with some fluctuations, whereas the figure for other species was unchanged during the entire period. Looking at the details, it is apparent that initiating at just under 2, 50, 000 in the very first year and declining to 1, 50, 000 in the following a decade, the number of Atlantic cod surged drastically to 1, 75, 000 in the year 2002 and again went down to roughly 1, 25, 000 during 2007. In terms of Haddock, although exactly 1, 50, 000 was observed in the initial year, this number escalated considerably and reached to 2, 00, 000 in 1992 before decreasing to 1, 00, 000 in the end of time period. Probing further, interestingly, the Swordish accounted for almost 1, 00, 000, which were constant throughout the given time frame. Similarly, the Haddock were at nearly 75, 000 in starting year and remained stable over the period.

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number
 of four specious fish around the globe between 1982 and 2007.

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some
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first
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year
 and declining to 1, 50, 000 in the following a decade, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of Atlantic cod surged drastically
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year
 2002 and again went down to roughly 1, 25, 000 during 2007. In terms of Haddock, although exactly 1, 50, 000 was observed
 in the initial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
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Probing further
, interestingly
, the Possible spelling mistake found.Swordfish
Swordish
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given
 time frame. Similarly
, the Haddock were at nearly
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year
 and remained stable over the period. 