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The charts illustrate the age group of the citizens of Yemen and Italy in the year 2000 and make forecast for 2050.

The charts illustrate the age group of the citizens of Yemen and Italy in the year 2000 and make forecast for 2050. 1kEoy

Overall, the majority of population for the year 2000 fall under the 0-14 age category in Yemen while Italy has a majority of 15-59 year olds. The projection for both the countries is that people of 15-59 age will be the most. Yemen just has 3. 6% of its proportion between the 60+ age group while Italy has almost 8 times higher people in the same category. Most of Yemenis were 0-14 years old in 2000 whereas for the Italians, 15-59 year olds accounted for 61. 6%. The predictions for the year 2050 suggest that both the countries will have adults as the majority of their population. Kids will make up 37% of the population in Yemen as compared to a mere 11. 5% in Italy. The difference for senior citizens amongst both the countries would have grown about 7 folds by 2050 with Italy accounting for 42. 3% as to that of 5. 7%.

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